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    Details: How Much is Too Much?

    As with everything in life, moderation is key. The only difference in writing is that you must pick and choose wisely. Fifteen facial features may be a bit too much whereas “he has a potato head with a bad comb-over” might be more than enough. Relating a character to someone everyone knows can be another way of moderating your detail on character descriptions. For example: “He has the body of Adonis on steroids…” or “She was as captivating as Aphrodite on a deserted island….” With characters, I like to focus more on who they are than what they look like. Yes, adding in a little physical description helps the reader…